Wow!  What a great and funny storyline except for the death of the brother.  It was quite tragic and it's so typical when she travel across land and sky to get the doll for him.  Incredible that she survived to the end seeing now she was beaten up, driven over etc.
I love the popculture/comic/manga references and the fighting match was excellent.

I can't really grabs how long it must have taken, but I am sure it has taken a while.
Keep it up!

(I understand and read German better than I speaks and write it)